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Lamentations Chant

Elemental essence heal this land,
for your powers sustain us all.
Creation's fate rests in your hands,
let not desecration us befall.
We call upon powers of the flame,
to cauterize our mortal wounds.
Beseeching waters , cleanse this stain,
deliver us from eclipsing doom.
Conjure for us your mysterious charm,
the softest breath of your four winds.
Protect us from evil's intentional harm,
setting blessed Earth to rights again.
We call on earth,wind,waters and fire.
deliver us from this deepening mire.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 9, 2008

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    The energies stir from this as you read it aloud. You’ve done a great job penning this piece and quite effective I must add. The trick to this one would be the visualization of the elements vs the elementals (sometimes they can run amuck). Overall a great piece here.


  • Blue Rew silver member
    November 6, 2008

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    Excellent! Each of the four sacred corners are
    given breathing space here and assigned certain powers. This one makes me believe you are a
    witch, and I should know, right?? Wonderful
    work and I hope you might continue to be
    inspired by this sort of theme. Blue


  • Kari gold member
    October 27, 2008
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    So mote it be x's three!