out on the prowl
the cat on the chase
my paws are on fire
i'm likin your face
I land on the street
with a clickety clack
I land on all fours
and I don't look back
I'm speedballing hard
your eyes of cocaine
i'm freefallin' down
to the alleyway
With the cats and the jazz
the eyes on tv
the looks that they give
all odds are on me
I continue my search
through the mist and the fog
Troubles a brewin
Here comes a dog
With his teeth and his grin
his spikes and his chains
they rattle around
and mesmerize the rain
I'm speedballing hard
your eyes of cocaine
i'm freefallin' down
to your alleyway
with the cats and the jazz
the eyes on tv
the looks that they give
all odds are on me
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Comments
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interesting
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i love it
but the clackiey clack part in the beginning seemed...childish. idk i just didnt like that one line
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listen to some brian setzer
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