last summer
filled with so many memories
but things have changed
and we drift apart
as a new horizon beams on us
me and him, not you
I wonder what's going on
is this love?
or a child's pathetic rebound?
do I really feel strongly for him?
or is this in my imagination?
what's going to happen soon
with the memory of you not far behind
he's right there
but am I ruining things again?
will I destroy him like the rest?
will he destory me soon enough?
all these questions
cause so much self doubt
they do nothing but annoy
and drive a poor girl crazy
will he ever love me?
or is this just a fling for him?
will we ever return together
or this neverending story finally over?
me and you are done
at least that's what we think
moving on is not so simple
for the brink of disaster is caused by unwanted confusion
the one that lingers here within my soul
A contest entry
- Damn...Can Noone Hear My HeartBreak? by RebelSoldier.
1050 points, ended November 1, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Your Confusion is Catching
I like your flow and feel your confusion. No relationship is easy and you show clearly how they are carried over and influence each other. Congratulations! Your silver is well deserved!
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I love this. I am positive this is NOT what I was lookin for but its amazing the things you find accidentally. =)
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lol oh sorry thats just what i kinda got like out of the prompt. i hope that doesn't hurt my chances ^_^
but thnx for the contest. i RLY needed to let this out and your contest proved just right for me. -
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Not at all. Like I said sometimes you find extraordinary thing when you aint lookin for em
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okie. yay. well i cnt wait till ya judge
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