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late night early morning vanishing days!!!

where did i go wrong
when did all of it change
what caused this caos
why do i have to be stuck in this time
how can i move on like this
which road should i take

my mind has ecsaped from me
where it went
i do not really know
it twas there a minute ago

this poem was sung to the song
that i love so dear

amazing grace how sweet this song
that it keeps me in faith when im gone
twas grace that taught my heart to feel
and grace gave me the strength
i needed to get along

late night early morning vanishing days!!!

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  • i wonder if i meant to have the first paragraph start each line as what when where why how and which? lol i cant remember, hmmm very interesting