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[ Can you feel everything? ]

Can you feel everything?
Anything?
The cross between the two.
A tugging
then silence
and you don't know how
to make your body rise
with reaction.

Nothing.
Then everything.
Both and not at all.
And the paradox
within the paradox;
not even who you are.

Nothing, everything
meaningless in re-use
so you're in apathy
toward either
in the midst of being all.

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I dunno...

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  • 245Trioxin
    October 27, 2008

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    I like the confusion, up down and inside out. Situations lend themselves to confusion more than anything.

    Hate is an empty feeling. Emptiness can feel like nothingness, yet nothingness is nothing, and there is no such thing as nothing, because if nothing weren't something, there would be nothing to talk about. Silence, like emptiness can feel like nothing without "nothing" ever having to exist. Which is as close to nothing as one can get