how mildly uncomfortable
when eyes take flight
in precise paths
its entirely too tiring
hiding away from the duller thoughts
while they soak the alleyways
in a monochromatic androgyne
that reaches for my periphery
the flies should move erratically
but land in all the same places.
what in hell is happening?
fall back orders hit the radio
but fall on the ears
of terminal indifference
such a stare could crucify
under more normal circumstances
how mildly uncomfortable
when eyes take flight
in precise paths
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fall back orders hit the radio
but fall on the ears
of terminal indifference
beautiful
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Absolutely phenomenal. I strive to write these kinds of strange and rare things. Your wording was so precise, so articulate. I admire such shortness of speech, and such power in simplicity.
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the flies should move erratically
but land in all the same places.
what in hell is happening? ...
what the hell, indeed!!!!
loved it . beginning to end .
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