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I Spy

I spy with my little eye
Too much time that has passed me by.
I spy with my little eye
Too many moments when I didn’t try.
I spy with my little eye
The tears on this page that have yet to dry.
I spy with my little eye
The dreams that I had behind which I would hide.
I spy with my little eye
A family that loved, laughed, and cried.
I spy with my little eye
That same family’s love pushed away to the side.
I spy a family that was torn apart
By the careless mistakes resting within my heart.
I spy with my little eye
The death of a dream and the birth of a sigh.
I spy with my little eye
The moments I lost ‘til the day that I died.

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  • heaven all alone
    November 21, 2008

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    The death of a dream and the birth of a sigh.

    Beautiful parallel stricture. haha. I love this.

    I spy with MY little eye
    an amazing girl's poems that can make me cry!


    • Amarillistarshot silver member
      November 21, 2008
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      You're too kind. Make you cry? Haha, now that's laughable. Thanks for the comment.