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Versus Departure

Downward drifting
Tilted glance
An awkward smile
(Hurry past)
My best work comes from this
Led into what--
This obscure point of reference?
So vague I can't be sure
Where it even is
So don't let go
I won't be able to find my way back
(Hey you)
Do you even know?
You wandered in here so late
Fell in
I wonder where you even came from
Don't worry--
The rain falls for us
It's not a flood
As long as you can swim
If you're not trapped
And I know a place where
It always rains
Just look at me
I don't like for it to pour,
But I'll be the rain for you
In this place you've taken me
Held hostage by something
So different
I have scarce words to describe
I can climb to the top
Prepare for the fall
So long as you can promise me
It's not now
So long as maybe
It's never or always.

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  • Nivram07
    October 28, 2008
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    hmmm I dont understand what it means??? please explain!