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Please;

I watch the rain fall
and it makes me think of you.
I know your gone,
and that i've moved on
but still, my mind wanders.

You were everything to me,
and you just let it go;
for something you ended anyway.
Now you say you love me still,
and you dont understand.

Once upon a time,
You were everything i knew
and it all fell apart.

It took so much time
to heal my heart;
even still its tattered
now you want to rip it again

and I just can't take it anymore;

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • lunagirl15
    October 27, 2008
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    i'm sorry sweetie... i really like this poem and i hope things get better for you