Sat here with the wind in my hair
The alluring smell of the salt in the air
Captivating beauty all around
As I admire the red sand on the ground
Beauty of the sea is so enticing
The sea gulls noises mesmerizing
The noise and the steam is astounding
The train is passing through which adds to the place being fascinating
There's the gentleman walking is dog alone
The children having wild fun away from home
An old couple walking hand in hand
A young couple making their positive stand
Entwined together looking into each others eyes
The sea breeze blowing through her hair
Romance is untainted
Love is sweet and unpainted
New life is wailing
Toddlers amongst the sand are playing
Girl's burning up on hot sunny days
Without acknowledging the damage from the rays
I am sat on this wall at my favourite place
A thinking haven, my sacred space
I am battling my darkness
Sad eyes staring out to sea opposing the bad friends that call out to me
Analysing everything little that is said or done
Keeping my boundaries undone
Sitting here until acceptance of my own mind
My perspective and insight is no longer blind
Author notes
My thinking beach ;-) in my town!
In a list
A contest entry
- I fell off the face of the earth D: by Jasmine Rayne.
1000 points, ended November 2, 2008, 20 entries
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ummm different for me but thought id give it a go, is it ok?
Comments
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I really liked the rhyme in this. I want to thank you for entering my contest and your lovely poem. I love to go to the beach.
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truly expressive and emotion driven Such great description and detail within. Thanks for the vision here... x
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picture added now
xx
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I have a place in the mountains where I go to think and contemplate life in general. An enjoyable read.
Rory
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Well done! A very enjoyable poem to read filled with loads of well designed visual cues...best of all you ended it strong.
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I think that this is really sweet I do not like the yellow background though but maybe because it is so early in the morning for me lol good luck in the contest be well
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Lovely
You have captured me. You are fresh! Keep on keepin' on.
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