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Schizoid Pissed on Fire

Sing.
It's you thinking
the world of opinion
remains subtle
and unchanged.

It's you bringing
down the tide
and creating a
fucking whirlpool
of anti-peace

The dirt breathes shit
and quick steps
It takes in
never considers the mock

I'd rather have you
braindead
and affectionate
a cat purrs
and i value that more than
the shit you give out

Constantly brought down
through 'opinion'
constantly scraped across
in the friction
of a blank wall

scribbling what one can
in the heat of the moment
it means nothing--
until the violent sky
broke out and declared you
worthless and insecure

until someone takes it
that you were referring
to them
a twinge of doubt
to bring down
the mountain

Author notes

i'm seriously considering deleting my account here.
what has it ever done
besides it bringing
thoughtless doubts and paranoia?

Someone please tell me
how to appease
a person who loves
to criticize?

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  • Annexed Josephine
    October 27, 2008

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    Someone please tell me
    how to appease
    a person who loves
    to criticize?






    you mock them. convincing yourself you are a good person. don't doubt that you are.