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I Shall go on

The sky that is has turned Grey
Dampness touches at the gravel
My footsteps echo as I trudge
The sounds of people once here
The sounds of people now gone
A life that's left open
Is now nothing but empty
But still, but still
I shall go on

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  • we-are-already-dead
    October 29, 2008
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    For all who read this and considered it a poem from a girl with a loss of words let me refresh you in the terms. A world once grey is once again blue its fresher greener and Positively new. So was I at a loss of words or a loss of CHOICE ill let you decide that.