The secret:
flow through the positive and cast out the bad,
but in all you do be true to you,
You deserve to be happy,
and live carefree,
Reflect this in thoughts,
and reap the rewards,
But be grateful to all things,
That make you feel good,
And discover a secret,
Within your soul
The energy around,
Is yours to control.
Learn it well, and all is yours,
The leaders of old they knew it too.
Time is now,
to share it with you.
I was inspired by its depth,
But most of all its simplicity,
Learn it well and you shall see,
A secret, it need not be.
A contest entry
- Depressing/Happy/Sexy/Hatred/Love by xrain dancerx.
900 points, ended November 24, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prizes or experiences? by Judith Chandler.
500 points, ended January 15, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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thank you for the grammar check.
I'll edit that now.
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This can be so difficult to follow but sometimes, I find, it works. Sounds like it works for you.
Third last line, "it's" should be "its".
Thank you for entering my contest. -
Lovely
Enjoyed reading this one
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o wow! great job! thanx for entering and good luck!
*hugs* tay/tess.
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