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Vampire Secret

I lived in the light, through the right.

I never thought I would meet the one.

I went in the dark.

Without pain but with love.

Darkness took me over.

 

It was longer to see reality.

Though life nor light company me.

I see what I have become.

To that I must accept.

I see in you what I must truely be.

 

To keep this a secret.

I must vow to not tell.

For if I do I'm doomed as well.

I give my love to thee.

And hide what I must.

 

 

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  • RainDownOnMe
    October 30, 2008
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    i like it

    it sounds really good. great job.