A bleeding note
Its permanent stain
Reverberating crimson pitch
Soothing aching bones...
Hands grasping tightly
Together in this final stride
We aren't afraid
And we fall in unison
Author notes
It's about two lovers committing suicide together while listening to their favourite song.
Romantic, eh?
Comments
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Interesting use of wording and great metaphors, Good luck o you in the contest and thank you for sharing your poem with me.
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dark and depressing. your images are strong and there is a certain eloquent power expressed here. thanks
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