I don't like that mean, drunk man
Who thinks he can drink as much as he can.
He says he will go away,
And that here is a horrible place to stay.
He's been to jail for being drunk.
He's been divorced twice, that awful skunk.
He's suppose to leave, but he hasn't left.
My mom wants to kick him out...
He acts like a 6 year old pest!
He's not my mom's responsibility,
And he makes me so nuts, I just might go crazy.
I never feel like I'm at home, at all.
All that man's doing here is just a stall.
I want that thing in my house to leave!
You should know that he is my biggest pet peeve.
Author notes
He's NOT my dad, he nicknamed ME "little one" because I'm the youngest, he's my mom's EX-boyfriend, he's a drunk addict, he NEVER keeps promises, and he fights WITH kids.
A contest entry
- Sadness and Despair by PoetryStar2.
400 points, ended November 13, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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that was amazing! i'm so sorry!
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little one? Thats funny! Hi little one!!!! Ish Awshome!


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this is really good lots of thought and emotion i feel very sorry for you and i wish you lots of good luck in the contest
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that's better...
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shoot! wrong background...
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