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And I Tremble

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Forever my love you have dwelt in my tenderest dreams,
A light which effortlessly unlocks the tides of my passion,
Arms to enfold my warm insecure heart.

How did I find this kind fortune,

With your soft silken touch, my breath is taken

And I tremble.


With fond febrile fears,
And excitable tears
I gasp,

 

Your fine golden hair is windblown aside,
Revealing a smile that tightens my chest with sweet yearning,
A smile that flickers so bright in those deepest blue eyes,
A rainbow of wonder that enraptures my soul,
Tearing away
Oh so gently, my hard outer mask.
With this delicate caress, I am reborn.......
Set ablaze.

 

With the most precious taste of certainty,
Know that I love you my blond hair blue eyed angel.

 

Til the seasons are no more
And the moon fades from the sky.
My love from my tenderest of dreams,
I love you with all that i am.


26/10/08  

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  • strawberrygirl
    November 6, 2008
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    I hope she makes you feel that way forever. I


  • Abe 1
    November 3, 2008

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    luv, luvin and luvers
    sexy tender n passionate
    ya ave shown this so well in most of ya poetry that i ave read lately
    gd luck 2 ya
    abe


  • Scrunter
    October 29, 2008
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    A powerful piece here with lots of depth. The last line choked me up! Good luck in the contest.