She lies openly before me
Naked, with downturned eyes
Arms spread wide, inviting
Heaven rests between her thighs
Pure is her desire
Liquid are her sighs
Fluid is her rocking
Her need she can’t disguise
My desire grows before her
As eagerly she does apprise
Thighs part offering heaven
What a vision, what a prize
As we lie down together
Our pleasure quickly does rise
Climaxing with revelation
As we both utter our cries
Words of supplication
Orgasms heavenly demise
Our love for one another
The greatest gift ever devised
A contest entry
- Crucify Your Emotions Picture Prompt by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
730 points, ended November 1, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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very great poem here you penned i think you did a very great awesome job here and good luck to you in this battle
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Thanks Mrs L! I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the HM!
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This is great! Thanks a lot for sharing this
write here. I really enjoyed reading it!
Keep it up!
Jeremy0826 -
BREATH TAKING
such a beautiful picture of love you have woven my bad influence...greatest gift given to man, completeness at a lovers hand...winner for sure
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