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My peaceful moments.

My peaceful moments

As I sit and meditate,
I can take myself to any place,
I need to start doing this again,
To feel that inner peace,
That I always feel here,
I love to see nature in my minds eye,
All the beauty that surrounds me,
All the country side that there is,
The mountains too…
This in itself takes away my blues,
May it only be for a few peaceful moments,
They really do count,
I feel so free,
Almost as free as a bird,
The weight I feel no longer exists,
Not when I’m in this bliss!
I ask you my friends,
If you have never meditated,
To please do so as you will never feel,
So free and can go to any place you would like,
And experience what I can,
Those few peaceful moments.

Namaste Selfexpressive.

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  • Spiritual Nature
    October 30, 2008
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    GREAT JOB!!

    Lovely and filled with the peaceful bliss. I go there too, when ever I get my mind to shut up and hear the world turning, the birds singing and the powerfully sweet sound of the trees swaying. No fight or resistance....just flowing with the current of love that truly surrounds all of us. You really made me feel this within your poem.

    BLESSINGS,
    Doris


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    I love to meditate it is like taking mind vacation, and everthing seems so peaceful.
    it is a wonderful little trip serene it is alot like being around nature a bit of freedom
    lovely write
    God bless you...


    • Selfexpressive
      October 30, 2008
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      Hi Pisces ... thank you for your comments on my poem... I love to meditate myself... its great to feel that inner peace... thank you again, I truly appreciate it, love,

      Selfexpressive aka Karen xx


  • your angers a gift
    October 28, 2008

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    yep I do that alot...great write...and great advice...everyone should experience the relaxation of meditation


    • Selfexpressive
      October 29, 2008
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      Hi... thank you for your kind comments... I also feel everyone should experience the relaxation of meditation... Its fantastic I find... thanks again,

      Selfexpressive aka Karen xx

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