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RugMunch for Dinner

I have to add a poem,
so I'm writing to your pussy,
i like men and women
im really not fussy,
as long as its wet
and warm and creamy
I don't mind the taste
i think its just dreamy
so if there is anyone out there
who likes a good rugmunch
give me a call and we will do lunch

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  • Galaxy2
    October 26, 2008

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    Wow...
    You seem to be a full meal, babe!
    Offer is accepted.
    When? Where?
    I'm impatient, if you're a baby girl....
    Gal