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I Can't Be Your Soldier[[Anymore]]

I'm sick of trying to be your soldier,
i'm about to break, about to blow my composure,
no matter how small the battle,
I Give it my all,
but i'm just too weak,
i'm too fragile, too small,
I can't do this anymore,
I can't try to stay strong,
when I dont even know what i'm fighting for.

I'm giving up,
i've been fighting too long to remember why i'm doing it in the first place,
am I fighting for you?
I dont want to to this,
I dont want to stay,
on this Earthy plain,
when all I ever seem to find is tears and more pain,
a victory means nothing,
winning the fight is just a lost cause,
because you're not here to share it with me,
or give me my applause,
I have no reason to fight,
no reason to try this hard,
what am I still doing here anyway?
What am I waiting for?
How can I honestly still think you'll come back to me?
when your the one that decided to leave,
Your broke me.
Now I cant be your soldier.
I can't be your dream come true.
Because I dont know what im doing here,
or why i'm still fighting for you.

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  • RebelSoldier
    October 30, 2008
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    I LOVE THIS....I really hope this is u fighting for the guy u loves...


  • Rhythm Child
    October 26, 2008
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    i loved the rhyme and this is something new, great poem, glad u wrote more ! :]


    • BeautifulEyesore.
      October 26, 2008
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      Thankies!!!
      I think the rhyme sounds a bit forced, myself.
      But eh thats just me.
      Thanks again.

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