You used to make me laugh
And I used to go to your house everyday
You tolerated everything I did
Even when you shouldn't have
When I went to your house
We did everything imaginable
And I didn't want to leave
Then you changed
And I started to miss you
You changed your looks
Your music changed
You had a different attitude
You started being rude
You would stick to a different person
Every week
And I kept missing your friendship
Bottom line is
I don't miss you, I miss the person I thought you were
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Option 2
a ) I don't miss you, i miss the person i thought you were.
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Comments
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I think this was pretty good…. I like the way you put this… it tells a good story … yea some people do change like seasons, it showed how you feel and how you miss the person he once used to be…
“You had a different attitude
You started being rude
You would stick to a different person
Every week
And I kept missing your friendship”
Nice piece!
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thanks! it really helps with confidence to get comments like that..
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