We will walk for miles,
draw our footprints in the sand,
- your hand in mine -
until the worries subside
in the winds of change.
Author notes
Prompt: Take my hand - 30 words or less
Prompt: I am your lover...and I want you to tell me how much you love me..using only 1 line.
A contest entry
- take my hand by going nowhere.
1600 points, ended October 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love this piece. Truly hearfelt and awe inspiring. But I am afraid it is too long to be considered a one liner. Sorry, but thanks for your entry...and it is still a wonderfully written poem.
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A nice write which creates a feeling of safety for the two whose hands are joined.
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Humm..I love the sublimity of the words and the message given here in the lines of love..wonderful move and the flow as well is heartwarming my friend..well done..and thank you so much for sharing it with me...
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this is so beautiful and amazing!! Very powerful and so few words. i absolutely love it!
i especially love the last two lines.
you are a true talent! i look forward to reading more of your work.
blessings *stomps
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beautiful image you painted here.. i love walking on the beach. .. and to hold the hand of someone i love while doing that... almost heaven. thank you
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I like it a lot, you did the prompt justice I think
Good luck
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