when clouds form,
there is still sunshine
when silent tears fall,
a smile can appear
when alone hangs
on shoulders
just look at your hand,
know that I am there
Author notes
Prompt ~ take my hand
In a list
A contest entry
- take my hand by going nowhere.
1600 points, ended October 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love it!!! You did a great job with this piece sis!!!! It is truly well written. You portrayed it wonderfully!!!
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"when alone/hangs on shoulders" I like those lines as well as the feeling of trust and comfort here.
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there is something in this... so simply stated, so full of truth... wonderful. thank you
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That's what friendship is all about, holding out a hand and having it accepted.
MM
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so true MM....it is nice to have friends that you can rely on and they can rely on you. It is just a shame that we live in a world where many only know how to take. Looking forward to finally meeting you gal
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