Take my hand hold me tight,
see me through lifes darkest night.
Take my love take my heart,
they were yours from the start.
A contest entry
- take my hand by going nowhere.
1600 points, ended October 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Simple, Sweet, To the Point and Elegant!!
You have said so much in 4 simple lines. Wonderfully emotional and Beautifully romantic.
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Your kind comment on my poem soulmates is much appreciated RikkiRae ... thank you ...
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Awe.....
This is just so sweet. I love it! I really love the title. Great job on this, and keep penning.
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Glad you liked it Tqop ... thank you for your lovely encouraging comment much appreciated.
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THIS IS WHAT WE CALL LOVE !!!!!
Short but full of truth Everyone's dream
Listen to the words and see happiness
GREAT WRITE
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging comment ... I only just seen it today hence a late thank you for your kind comment much appreciated.
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This is very beautifully written. I like the way you went with the prompt of "take my hand". It was very loving. I enjoyed the read!!!
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Thank you Juile Leigh for taking the time to read and leave an encouraging comment much appreciated.
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Only one verse but says so much, and says it so strongly, and with feeling. I'm glad I stopped in to read. Very effective words from a loving heart. Thanks for sharing
Blessings,
Ron
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Hiya Ron ... thankyou for calling by dear friend it is always so nice to hear from you. I hope you are well and thank you so very much for your kind comment on my poem ... thanks Ron.
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EVER SO SWEET!!
These few words say so much as to what you are feeling inside!
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Hope you are well Pureheart...your friend from the UK...also thank you for your encouragement much appreciated.
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Short but EFFECTIVE. Another excellent write!! I am truly enjoying reading your work.
TD
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Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.
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this is so simply said, but it is all that is needed to be said. beautiful.
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Glad you liked my poem thank you kindly for encouraging me with your kind comment.
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So sweet, I loved it! Love the idea too... I've been hearing a lot of people say lately that they don't believe there is only one person for you, but I'd like to believe God has designed someone special for each person. Idealistic, maybe, but anyway I like this piece a lot. :-D Seems it could be eight lines as well, the rhthym seems to fit that way also... But nice write! Have a wonderful Christmas season! Blessings. :-)
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to stop by and read and leave an encouraging comment on my poem...much appreciated
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Just Perfect Love
Oh this is just a beauty. I loved every word. I so admire your love for your precious soul mate. This was excellent and I hope they haven't judged this yet for this was a golden write to me.
Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
PS I'm just trying to get caught up on returning the favors. Oh I got so far behind. Just love you my dear sweet sister in Christ....
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Thank you my dearest friend Kelle Marie for your upbuilding words of encouragement from your precious heart my dearest dear friend.
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SO, SO SWEET!!!!
Your words just melt ones heart, they have this light, touching and sweet feeling to them!
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Thank you for your kind words and encouragement much appreciated
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Love this!
you make Love feel like it should be! GOOD!
Blessings'
Rend
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Hmmmn... Love sure is good...thank you for your thoughtful comment.
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this is sooo sweet!!!
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Glad you liked it...thank you for your kind comment.
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so true... wanting to give them all... our soulmate... one we would wait for just to hold onto through it all... thank you.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and leave me a kind comment...
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