daughter wanted me to do one more minute
past palindrome struck hair
as autumn wind is really gone inside our house
when I trace tresses to treasure of summer road
A contest entry
- take my hand by going nowhere.
1600 points, ended October 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh... this made me think of brushing a friend's little sister's hair... when i visited, she always liked me to brush her hair, and paint her toenails (but that is off topic.. haha) lovely take on the prompt. thank you
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going nowhere your caption shows you can bring many a nice touch
thanks for sharing my details triggered likewise for you. yes, the extra home salon portion would be coughed at by me, but btw my girl cogently wanted to investigate this year if natural is legitimate brand by my handling... and crowd's viewpoint peripherally. turns out they make negligible chemicals as okay with mainstay material of earth to take to body modestly, susceptible to sensitivities...
I did (not dud!) enjoy the transition with your inciting,
called Carolyn
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