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When People Cry

When people cry
It doesn't matter if you're involved
If you stand there and stare
Nothing ever gets solved

When people cry
Don't be quick to judge
They're hope may be wearing thin
Their hearts need a little nudge

When people cry
Tears don't always fall
Maybe they hurt inside
That's the worst of all

Author notes

I know, I know. I know it's not the best. This was just a poem I wrote to get my creative juices flowing. I haven't written for a while, so don't judge this poem too harshly!

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  • MorganTea
    December 12, 2008
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    Hilarious