Philanthropic surgeons
replacing poverty’s
mangled palms
with love's
surgery.
Author notes
Prompt: Take my hand
A contest entry
- take my hand by going nowhere.
1600 points, ended October 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow this is a great take on the promt, very interesting actually, I liked the form you used and the language fits in well with the theme you have going here, great work
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each word has such meaning in this... what a message with so few words. thank you
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Excellent Write
This is the truth. Wow another powerful poem. Wishing you the best in the contest as always.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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What a great take on the prompt. The favourite of the ones I have read so far, very nicely penned. Good luck
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A nice thought. Maybe it will happen one of these days. I like your message here.
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Excellent take on the prompt
Your imagery is amazing
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