Cautious steps
whittle whispers
beneath rose petals
and sunsets,
grasping reassurance
from the hand offered in care.
Here is where eyes meet heaven
and breath gasps
realizing faith.
Author notes
prompt: take my hand
30 words or less (28 words)
A contest entry
- take my hand by going nowhere.
1600 points, ended October 27, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Glorious in all aspects. A true reflection of your marvelous talent, and well-deserving of the Gold!
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Neon
Thank you so much.
Your comments on my verse mean so much my talented friend. Thank you. ~Pamela 
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The imagery and flow just get me every time.How DO you do it?!
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Thank you again. Your kind comments are so appreciate. ~Pamela
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such a prescious write and well-deserving of gold
congrats Pamela
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moon2u
Thank you so much for your kind words. Much much appreciated. ~Pamela
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what amazing imagery... so filled with softness that i want to jump and land in it... wonderful. thank you
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going nowhere
Thank you so much for your wonderful words, a prompt that spoke dearly to me and the honor of gold in your contest. Thank you. ~Pamela 
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This is an exellent take on the prompt.
Written in splendid colour and taste
I like the background you have used.
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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Tony
Thank you my friend for your kind words of encouragement. Much appreciated. ~Pamela
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something about the way life can bring things that we can hold on to, the ropes and ladders of the climb, the tools for the journey... wonderful in brevity, and depth...PK...
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PK
Thank you so much my talented friend. I always appreciate your words on my verse. Thank you. ~Pamela
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