take my hand
and lead me to the place
where happiness exists
[i so badly want to feel]
Author notes
18 words...
A contest entry
- take my hand by going nowhere.
1600 points, ended October 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOW! I really enjoyed reading this. Everyone wants happiness. Hurry & write more my dear, I am waiting to read it! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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short and simple
nice...
Courtney -
only 18 words
but they where apparently enough
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i wish it was as easy as that... well done. thank you
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soshort yet so filled with words
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It certainly expresses the isolation people feel when the sense of touch is so neglected in the lives we lead. Or it could be about sex!
Nice write.
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umm...it's not about sex....
but i guess it could be interpreted that way...
hm...i didn't even think baout that when i wrote it....
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I want to feel happiness too...
just to go there for a moment would be powerful...
Great write hunny!
*hugs*
Just like everything else you write...
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i think everyone does...it's why so many peole lie to themselves..saying that their happy...when they've got new cuts on their legs and bruises on their eyes....
*hugs*
thanks
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Ah, how true.
Your welcome hunny!
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yeah...doesn't that suck?
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Ah, yep!
It does...
oh well. -
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life sucks...and yet it is SO worth living....
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Yes, yes it is...
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i wish i knew what i was living for.,...
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as do i...
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you're living because people love you, because you have a life worth living
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