I get up early
run my hands through my hair
brush my teeth with my finger
take a long look and glare
Smell my armpits for an ok
no shower today
you will soon be here
take my cologne and spray
The door is a knocking
I take one last good look
smile big for the final picture
Open the door wide like a book
For the story begins
when you walk through my door
Your hair all in place
I know I will score
You glance all around
at my untidy place
Yet I can't get my mind off
of your panties all in lace
I push the papers off the sofa
make a spot for your backside to sit
You smell like roses
I just want to kiss you and all that shit
Finally it happens
your tiny finger touch mine
The sofa will have to do
because my bed I can't find
Time goes by as our hearts get to beat-in
we mingle together for a long time
Now I know that I love you
I see all the signs
Now we have a date for dancing
Yet I feel I want to just stay home
You get up to dress
I grab my comb
Smiling like the sun is in us
We grab hands for the ride
I think you look great
with you by my-side..
A contest entry
- Battle of the Sexes ~ Ladies First! by Xianaria.
700 points, ended December 15, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I agree very nicely done funny with a slight romantic touch.
He got it done huh? lol
Thanks for entering,
~Lisa~
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LOL ~ nice rhyme & flow, pretty funny, yet romantic.
Thank you for entering!
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Men are really stupid lol well not all of them
lol
This made me chuckle good luck in the contest be well
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