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you define me

eight letters, but then again so is bullshit
never used to be able to believe in it
said it a few times, but it was just a word
just a saying to bring umtilmate hurt

i wanted to say it, i wanted to feel
but how can you know if its really real
no one could say, just that i would know
when i met that person i dont want to let go

and then i met you, and i heard your sweet voice
and gone from me was any kind of choice
and just when i thought i had had enough
i found you, my defintion of love

Author notes

b ) Love is just a word until you find someone to give it definition.
RaynesRednekSoldier

okay so its bad, ohhhh well lol

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  • Shuberth
    October 26, 2008

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    spelling mistake noone = none
    but i can understand that.... i like this i think you described it very well... the flow and the rhymes were good!


  • Ti Amo Te Quiero
    October 26, 2008

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    Great job here, though you should really correct the spelling mistakes. But overall, its was quite fine. Thanks for entering and good luck!!