and so you see me,
but do you really know?
the Sorrow and anguish i feel,
have you ever been this low?
beginning the day anew,
in torture i wAke.
why couldn't my life been taken,
before this dawns break.
slow motion fills my day,
liVing each minute alone.
even though he shows love,
i'm always on my own.
my existEnce full of pain,
taking in all the bad.
pounding fills my head,
always being sad.
swallowing shit to Make me numb,
to try to forget the depression.
relieving tension from the skin,
insensible to each incision.
so now, you see the picture,
you thought you knew me.
i fakE my pain with a smile,
until i can be set free.
Author notes
*There's always a hidden message in the things people say. Maybe you can find it.*
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Wow.....such depth in your poetic voice here....lots of people should learn from your hand of knowledge....thank you for shaing...God bless you,
Bear ~
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Beautiful
This is so beautifully open about an addicts life well at least what I'm going through lol.
simply beautiful :-)
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This is so deep and sad!
What a terrible feeling to have deep down
inside of you all of the time. It's so important
to never judge people in life because, you never know just what they are going through deep inside. It can be a very challenging and devastating time in their lives. Well done and thanks a lot for sharing this thought here!
Jeremy0826 -
baby put the pills down and smoke the weed...but on a serious note, im loving how u can change up the tones of ur writing. ur emotions are deep. much love...and forgive me for stalking ur page tonight, have u on my mind and wanna snoop a bit on u. ur just like me, ur poetry is like a diary.
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Powerful write
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