i've been so rude for a while,
didn't mean to hurt you so bad.
i regret all the sins i've done,
go ahead and kill me if you want.
i beg for your full forgiveness,
for my heart is crying in pain.
i want you my love to be back,
back to where we have started.
the time you said you love me,
and smiling with your sweetness.
how i want you to need me,
the way i am needing you.
i can do anything just for you,
change myself and just love you.
i'll just take whatever you have,
full trust is what i give you.
though my heart has been covered,
covered by this stupid jealousy.
i will just hold on to your love,
and believe in everything you do.
i can't live without you in my life,
loving you means my whole being.
i will take care of you no matter what,
let me feel your love and be with me.
Author notes
an event that happened in your life that you learned something from it, where you struggled
A contest entry
- Forgiving is a part of life by Writing0Freedom.
400 points, ended November 21, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Santuary Of Words... by SummerlandRayne.
750 points, ended November 6, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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We do live and learn don't we Sweety? I have learned so much the hard way. This is a very honest and open write and I appriciate you sharing your heart. Blessing to you dear!
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I like the last stanza its for me the most powerful part of it! Can you please put what option you used in AN though. I like it though the first stanza seemed off to the rest of the poem - it just seemed to harsh I think. I applaud you for your loyalty though, its not easy but you make it sound like its something you just do!
WritingFree
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i did it...actually your options is not that clarified in your contest...
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aww ... this is so chweet .... I loved this .... I would have definitely given you a gold for this .... and something much more than a gold trophy for your loyalty and care towards your love ..... SUPERB!!!
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This is so honest, full of raw emotion
that moved me so.
Good luck in the contest
and thank you for sharing
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