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To you

I 've felt you somewhere before?...
                                    in my heart





















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  • Rele anmwe
    December 13, 2008

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    YEAH, but she is not speaking directly to you, she is speaking to me. So stay out of it. Hi aurie, i like it a whole lot. it is so cute


  • darell
    December 9, 2008

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    Cute

    This was a lovely little poem
    with a profound acquiescence to it.
    One gets the feeling that you're speaking
    directly to them. I like that.
    Great job my friend