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Sweety

My daughter quarrel

    freeze like ice

melts next dawn,

    under warm affection

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dedicated to my A.P. daughter
your's Pappi

A contest entry

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    this was very nice hon you really did a very great excellent job here good luck to you in the contesy


  • Shakes-spear
    November 12, 2008

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    very nice

    It is wonderful to have people that mean so much in your life. Your AP Daughter sounds very nice! Good luck in the contest! The Shaker


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    October 26, 2008

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    Beautifully Sentimental

    What a wonderful dedication. It is sweet and flowing. I enjoyed reading this joyful sentiment. ~Gypsy~


  • written-in-ink
    October 26, 2008
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    hah
    very nice

    i like

    =]

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