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I'm Missing You

It is already October
I don’t want November to come
I can’t believe I’m here
I have good days, then some

Some are just ok
Others I don’t know what to do
Sometimes I just feel lost
But everyday I’m missing you

I know that I really should
be over it by now
but I can’t seem to move on
I just don’t know how

Grief they say
takes a long time for some
It is already October
I don’t want November to come

Author notes

I wrote this in 2006 coming on the first anniversary of my best friends death. It will be three years this year and I still feel the same as I did that first year.
other poems I have written of her
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4002397
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4663131
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3659736
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3633596

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  • Legend silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    I read this one earlier and i am surprised that i did not comment My apologies as i truly intended to I thought it was a beautiful if somewhat sad poem That really does show the heartache felt. If i am honest deserving of much more recognition in this contest Excellent


    • januaryrain gold member
      November 2, 2008
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      Thank you Legend, your comment warms a cold heart in November.


  • NeonRose
    November 1, 2008

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    A lovely haunting theme in this write. I know this feeling; it is very deep. I lost my Dad in November, and I hate to see it come around each year. My condolences on your loss.


    • januaryrain gold member
      November 2, 2008
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      Thank you, so sorry you can relate, my condolences on your loss.

  • ea silver member
    October 27, 2008

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    This puts me in mind of the grief brought on by darkening days (SADD) and how we so dread the loss of light.

    Very sorry about your friend.

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