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Elevator to Insanity

This elevator to insanity
Is rising to the top.
I'm losing my mind,
I can't make it stop.

I pull up my umbrella
But down came the rain.
I try to stop the feelings.
I just want to stay sane.

This elevator, reserved for me,
Will never stop.

A contest entry

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  • Emo Hearted Emz
    October 29, 2008
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    very well witten

    i love it very well written

  • ghetto child29
    October 26, 2008
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    I like your poem and you actually could of left the last sentence but it was really nice.


  • penman gold member
    October 26, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.