A tiny drop of water
Emiting from your eye
Gently rolling downward
Accompanied by a sigh
It's very, very natural
It's nothing you should fear
It's feelings come to surface
It's emotion - It's a tear
It happens when you're happy
It happens when you're sad
It helps to tell a story
An experience you have had
So when you're feeling happy
Or sadness may be near
Let your heart express itself
By shedding that small tear
Mr. Doug
A contest entry
- Make Me Cry by ladybug..
650 points, ended May 31, 2009, 59 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Eyes by misticmoonlite.
800 points, ended December 11, 2009, 17 entries
Honorable mention
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This indeed let me share some tears...this is beautifully described as eyes are full of details, thank you for entering this poem in my contest
As always good luck
Linda
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This had a very good flow to it when I read it aloud. It was a excellent description of a tear, and I appreciate this poem to a high extent. Thank you for entering.
-Kelsi -
Outdtanding
A poem so beautiful that it sheered me up.
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A near perfect description of a tear, really quite lovely and gentle. (The one thing you forgot, outside of emotion... allergy...lol)
Just kidding, of course, your poem is brillianty written, smooth flowing and meaningful.
Dee
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This is so sweet and I've never seen a poem that describes a tear. Great job!
Hugs!
Cayla
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