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Oh Liadan

Oh my dear Liadan,

I have missed your

smiling face, your 

helpful ways, your 

warmth in bed.

Oh, my dear Liadan,

to see you and hear you 

everyday,

every hour, 

every minute, 

will bring passion back 

into this home.

Oh my dear Liadan,

this home you built,

the way it’s decorated.

it’s feeling when you’re 

here, is beyond words.

Oh my dear Liadan,

my love, my life,

the flame that lights

our home, heats my

soul, fills this space. 

It will be a blessing 

from God to see you again.

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This poem entry is a bit Whiman-esq, but perhaps can warm a soul, a heart or two.

 

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    October 30, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautifully expressed entry, Josie

  • Silver Sionnach
    October 27, 2008

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    Warmed, indeed! I am positively moved by the kindness and heart in this poem. I cannot thank you enough. Lencio is right, my husband would love to read this aloud to me (though he's now exhausted and sleeping from taking care of our two young sons). But thank you for this. I am deeply touched.

    ~ Li


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    October 26, 2008

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    Beautiful, I can visualise how Draven could be reciting this poem for his beloved wife Liadan. This poem will certainly warm the hearts of the entire family, I am sure of this. I truly loved the 4th verse, it's rather painful to see all the things that is done by those we lose and remember them, thankfully God had brought Liadan back to us and we can now rejoice, and see as she further decorates Very soon, all our hearts will be warmed by her presence here too.

    Thank you for writing his truly fulfilling poem.

    Love and light,
    Lencio


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    ahhhh

    this is cute i hope she has a smile as it did put one on me, nice and sweet poem for your friend,
    good luck
    Linda