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Don't forget

There hands toached, There eyes met, and every thing around them they seemed to forget.

He smiled but she didn't realize the feeling he got when looking in her eyes.

No words were said but heard from the heart " How can I live when we are apart."

The music played a beautiful sound and they danced all night round and round.

She reached for his hand but toached his heart.

"DOn't forget me." she said

And there they would part

True.

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  • KrazyKid
    October 26, 2008

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    Wow

    Nice wording, and a nice message! I could feel the pain in their separating. I also especially liked the "She reached for his hand but touched his heart" GREAT line! Keep writing!