In sweetened shreds that hint of Shangri-La
I see the sky entice the naughty sea
and endless beaches acting so bourgeois,
as Coconut Bay wakes a mind that’s free.
Moist tender flesh is ensnared in darkness
bittersweet taste that melts hot on the tongue
sending senses swirling and I confess
passion for tropical heat all along.
She takes me from cold England’s wind and rain
in embraces where each moment is bliss,
in this paradise, she eases my pain,
O loving caress of Bounty’s sweet kiss.
Author notes
A contest entry
- Contest: Yankee Candle Titles by Mairi bheag.
900 points, ended November 9, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Damn! Now I'm bloody dying for a Bounty Bar!
I love the rhyme of "Shangri-la" and "bourgeois", that's totally cool.
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Thankies lady
Bourgeois had to be, it is Bounty, that comes from a game where choccy bars were given status, sensual Flakes, decadant Mars, etc.
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great write Jems m'Lady
finds the hidden Bounty wrapper and bins it . any trace of choccie now gone ...
I love You
xxx Your angel xxx
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LMAO damn I'll have to eat another to replace it now
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Tasty and Sweet
This offer the reader a lovely look at a paradise, with lovely swams of pleasures that please the senses. Walking the bay, absorb the warmth, escape from cold embraces to grasp sweet kisses in passions Coconut Bay.
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I see a soft focus chocolate ad from the middle seventies
Great stuff
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well umm yeah umm hides the Bounty wrapper, these things happen
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