you spread like
cancer in
my euphoria,
every invading
cell matching
my thoughts.
and though we
fit like jigsaws,
you can't deny
even we
have
manufactured
faults.
but they're
holes,
no more than
the gaps
between
the stars in
our sky
where we occur
the most often.
remember me.
I sang rhythms
in your
sleeping hours.
remember me,
even if
you're
taken
to the
point of
oblivion.
Author notes
option 5 , 6,7 possibly.
to the people that love me.
A contest entry
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550 points, ended December 8, 2008, 35 entries
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Comments
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wow this was really good. i love the way you show how even if you love someone you will always have your differences. Great write
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I like it. It's very disjointed but nice.
I like the 4th stanza the best. The last is a very close favorite too.
Thanks for entering
Nikki -
your an amazing writer for someone who is only thirteen, wow "and though we
fit like jigsaws,
you can't deny
even we
have
manufactured
faults.
" that line is stunning...
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