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keep it close

i cannot remind
myself
not to remember you

i wanted to break my skin open
and let you into my blood

lately i
wanted to take you out on the town
but i have forgotten your name
.
.
.
.
darling take your sticks
out of your back pocket
and kiss me

darling take your mind
off of whatever it is
and hold me closer

darling i have
forgotten who you are
or if you ever existed
.
.
.
.
i'm reminding you now
to keep it close
let it linger in your mind

i am not just saying hello
because i have no one else
to talk to.

Author notes

this is in three parts.
thus the separation.
i'm not quite sure what it is.
sorry i stole the title from the contest.

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  • acoustical
    October 26, 2008
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    oh it's sad.
    bittersweet i guess,
    and i like you.