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You Can Blow My Mind

Setting sun on a beautiful day
Tear down my walls
Emotions are charged
Can you hear my heart beating?

It's like you don't see me
But rather feel me there
You blow my mind
Can we stay like this for just awhile?

Moments like these are too sweet
Melting away like a candy but even sweeter
So easily my mind is blown away
All it takes is a simple smile

You can hear my strangled gasp
My beating heart thumping
I surely think
You can blow my mind

With your eye on the skies
Time is just moving too fast
You can blow my mind
You can steal my heart anytime

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Well, I think this was mostly thinking about a song and a person.

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  • I-Feel-weightless
    November 8, 2008
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    Hey this is awesome, I really really liked it. good job


  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    October 26, 2008

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    Awww, I love your poetry. You're too gooood!!
    Stop showing me up!
    How can I beat you when you write this well.
    Pooh.
    >:-[
    Haha :->
    I ♥ SHOES!

  • buzzard
    October 26, 2008
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    Wonderful

    This has a lot of feelings