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Between Fear





Hidden monster
rattling paws,
shreds of flash,
choked horrible screams.

Sitting On bed,
but within a chill
blowing all zombies out
ghostly haunts
turning, ripping air
with their sighs.














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  • Valley Girl silver member
    October 27, 2008

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    Wow! Very creepy and descriptive! Thank you for your entry, best of luck in the contest. ♥


  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 26, 2008

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    oooo this is creepy. well described dad. keep penniing