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Dreaming in Blue

Before I woke up
we were together
in body
and in soul

Before I woke up
I held you
in my arms
in my heart

Before I woke up
we were devoted
two hearts
one love

Before I woke up
I was dreaming in blue
dreaming of your name
Jonathan Christopher

Before I woke up
I felt the love
and light
in your laugh

And then I woke up
and realized
you were only a dream
my baby boy

Author notes

I had this very vivid dream of having a baby boy named Jonathan Christopher... I had this dream for over a week...every night

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  • Se
    October 26, 2008
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    Wow it is almost bittersweet.