"When I die will you come to my funeral and bring me purple flowers?" Charlotte asked.
"I'd be sad as hell, but of course." Her friend, Sara, replied. A pause and then, "But you aren't dying anytime soon, right?"
"No, I'll miss you." Charlotte said.
A year later Sara was buying purple flowers.
A contest entry
- Stories- SHORT!!! sweet, and to the point... by worshipchick.
760 points, ended October 28, 2008, 16 entries
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I love the dialogue. Good use of it within the limits. Although a little predictable, still powerful. I enjoyed it. Thanks for entering!
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i like this a lot...especially with the quote...and i love purple...and idk i just liked the simplicity in it.
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Hah, thanks :]
I loveee purple too.
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