Once upright and transparent,
an honest love so apparent;
He now swaggers with a new
cloak of invisibility with a
confidence of invincibility.
Once his word was tried and true,
filling the craving to know him within you.
Shifting eyes are now the answer
to every question; lying lips
the new ingestion.
With a lighthearted grin and
a new laid back style;
he thinks he is hiding it
all the while, but
Silence speaks louder
than any word spoken;
the heart screams in pain
when it knows it's been broken.
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a good poem, i like the sing-song quality at the end of the first verse, ah adultery, people do it all the time i think, most have not been caught yet lol - a good poem.
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good
I liked this alot especially how on point you got the situations and deception. way to go :-)
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brillantly done and so true. The words rang true. Im sure that anyone who has gone through this will understand and feel the pain within these verses. But I thought. you expressed yourself well. It had so much feeling and from the heart. Great job.
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oche you sound like you have been there.Well done my friend
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