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Silence

in the quiet i hear the words
the words neednt be spoken
the words that we hear but never say
finally you ask what
what i am thinking
if only you knew
knew that you ment the world to me
yet so much more
if only you understood
if only you knew
you are such a free being
im afraid to take that from you
afraid to become dependent
we promise of never leaving
we know no endings
two scorched hearts
finally regrowing
scars matching
scars disappearing
neednt be there any longer
for now we have the other
the one with the part we had been missing
looking for,searching for
thinking it was a lost cause
only to find it
in anothers hands

Author notes

I'm not sure what to think of this one.. i like it but i don't




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